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14 07 2008

Posted by: rongeb5 in yr11 writing



as i have prayed for many times

i hope the elder house is still there

i hope the grass which smells like the sunshine is still there

i hope the little boat is still there

i hope the dream can just come to me when i am not sleeping　

and finally, everything brokes

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  1.   joeeb5 Says:
    July 16th, 2008 at 5:50 pm

    i hope the sexy girl is still there hahahahahahahahahaha

  2.   msd2007 Says:
    July 21st, 2008 at 10:35 pm

    Joe! Remember this is for school you silly billy.

    Ahhh…how come everything “broke”? what a disappointment for the narrator. You shoudl develop that part of it more, I want to know more more more! :)

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